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We Love a Man in Uniform
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Bio , produced by
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Seder, Laguens and Hamburger for Harmon for Mayor.
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Just when you thought it was
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safe to turn on your television, the political spots are back. No matter that
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the president is back in the White House and Newt is in the speaker's
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chair--odd-numbered years like this one bring what campaigners call "off-year
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elections," the gubernatorial campaigns in Virginia and New Jersey and mayoral
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races in big cities like Los Angeles and New York.
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Bio , produced for St.
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Louis mayoral hopeful Clarence Harmon by Dawn Laguens, presents something of an
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anomaly: an African-American Democrat running to the right. The candidate,
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Clarence Harmon, faces another African-American Democrat--incumbent Freeman
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Bosley (St. Louis is forbidden ground for Republicans). The Harmon-Bosley
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rivalry is not new: Harmon was the police chief under Bosley until he quit in
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1995, claiming political interference from the mayor's office.
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The spot is crafted to reach
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more conservative voters by building on Harmon's image as a man who's tough on
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crime. Both image and issue also resonate in the black community, whose
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neighborhoods have been hit the hardest by crime. The ad opens like a
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traditional biography. "As a young boy," the narrator reassures us, "he worked
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to help support his family." The language is precisely calibrated, giving no
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details about the child's labors. The accompanying photograph reinforces the
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squeaky-clean image--the picture might have been the only one available, or one
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of a small handful, but it strikes a note that will carry through the spot:
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Harmon is always well-dressed, and he is always smiling.
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The next scene is a
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photograph of Harmon as a young soldier, conveying both the passage of years
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and steadiness of character. The hard-working boy has become a man who does the
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tough jobs, but the smile endures. Again, the language is careful, precise;
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again, it says little: "When duty called, he stepped forward." The words echo
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that famous line from John F. Kennedy's Inaugural Address and evoke an image of
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the stalwart soldier answering the clarion call to battle. Did Harmon
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volunteer, or was he drafted?
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The spot then puts Harmon in
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a new uniform, this time the police chief's. Unfolding headlines reiterate
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Chief Harmon's public service. "A Chief Who Welcomes Change"--you can bet that
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polling results show the people want change, as usual. "First Black to Lead
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Force," the only racial reference, attempts to touch black pride while still
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appealing across racial lines. And finally, "Super-Chief Clarence Harmon," a
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much stronger fillip than a conventional bio spot's recitation of the
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candidate's achievements.
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The spot then moves to the
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present--and the problem: a shot of an abandoned lot with the St. Louis Arch in
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the background and a chyron proclaiming, "Our city cries out for a leader."
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Overworked language, no doubt, but effective shorthand that communicates how
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St. Louis has been stripped of its vitality as people and businesses have moved
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to the suburbs. Continuous narration ("once again, Clarence Harmon answers the
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call") implies that Harmon is the person the city needs, as the camera captures
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him shaking hands with a white leader. Though Harmon is in a coat and tie here,
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we keep seeing him as he was and as he's really running--as a man in uniform
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who was ousted by the system and has now stepped up to the plate, yet again.
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Whether or not he can "solve problems" as the chyron suggests he will, and
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despite the fact that Bio is mute on his plans, the leaders and cops who
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surround him in these scenes provide visual endorsements, suggesting that he
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stands for progress.
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The chyron announcing that
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he will "stop corruption" appears over a scene apparently set in a district
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attorney's office. This may be fertile ground, and taps a background of
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accusations (against the incumbent mayor's father, against the circuit clerk)
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and intrigue (about a mysterious murder, and about the mayor himself being
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barred for life from federal projects after allegedly defaulting on an $8
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million HUD loan). Harmon is running by default as the anti-corruption
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candidate.
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The last two scenes carry
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the same message: "Help our city to be great again." What does "great" imply
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here? The spot hopes viewers will fill in the blanks with "old-fashioned
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values," "law and order," "economic growth," and "cleaning up government," all
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of which the spot has claimed Harmon stands for. And who constitutes the "our"
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in "our city"? The visuals first focus on elderly white women and then cut
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across racial lines to a mixed group of children, an appeal for change, a break
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from the past.
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The pileup of clichés ends
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with a safe "Clarence Harmon, Mayor." Nothing strident, nothing to disapprove
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of.
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Nothing
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to pop the corks over, either.
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--Robert Shrum
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